Friday, 18 August 2017

Tha Zin Quality Comments

Today we sat down on our mat and took a look at how we could write a quality comment.

Thursday, 10 August 2017

Tha Zin Guardians of the Galaxy

Welcome to earth my name is Tha Zin and here with me is Rozaidah.
These days we have to take care of our home ( Earth ).
We have to find a new home on another safe planet because earth is no longer safe.
Earth is dangerous cause of air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution and more.

We need to find a new home that has water, food and shelter for us to live.

We first went to mars but that was too cold for us to live on.
Then we left mars and went to jupiter but that was too cold
So then we went to venus but guess what it was too hot so we left quickly but then when we found out that all of the planets were not right for us we just went back to earth.

Well then when we arrived back home (known as Earth) we did a little tidy up.Then when we fixed up earth it was cleaner than before except for the building where it caused  the pollution  we had to do something about it so what we did was took down the building.

Well a few years have past and its still how it was so that's good but if we don’t look after our home we will have to find a new home (planet).We only have enough supply of oxygen for three years for all of us to live.Since our planet doesn't have healthy food and oxygen for us because of pollution.After three years we found out that there was actually enough oxygen for all of us to live on earth for a very very very long time.

We learnt a very important message and that is look after your home (planet) treat it nicely and that make sure  that you pick up your rubbish.